Rise Of the Orcs

[knightl]

You love tormenting us with the ending

[buddhist23]

Originally Posted by knightl

a sentence cannot be broken into parts thereof it wouldn't be a sentence now would it and it was straightforward unless you don't know the meaning of the words

thereof it

the meaning of that word doesn't exist...

[Neinth]

perhaps we should edit these posts so they all say constructive things about lastchancers story.

And i think last got my little joke about the sex scene,if he didnt perhaps he would add something about some female wardens and goblin trist in the story somewhere.....

[buddhist23]

Originally Posted by Neinth

perhaps we should edit these posts so they all say constructive things about lastchancers story.

And i think last got my little joke about the sex scene,if he didnt perhaps he would add something about some female wardens and goblin trist in the story somewhere.....

feels like a dead story to me if someone keeps bumping it instead of updating it

[Dreamwalker]

Nice to see somebody else writing stories! I want to know what happens next!

[knightl]

When can you do more theres only a handful of storys out there and this ones the best of the orcs,

[buddhist23]

Originally Posted by knightl

When can you do more theres only a handful of storys out there and this ones the best of the orcs,

ME WANT MORE!





TO buddhist


no therefore its one sentence already so it can't be broken down into more sentences as it conveys one point and it does exist go learn a word or 2

no therefore its one sentence already so it can't be broken down into more sentences as it conveys one point and it does exist go learn a word or 2

That's a run on sentence.
Learn some grammar before attempting to misuse words....


TO thread- this story is dead. Bumping yourself should not even be allowed.

[knightl]

Originally Posted by buddhist23

no therefore its one sentence already so it can't be broken down into more sentences as it conveys one point and it does exist go learn a word or 2

That's a run on sentence.
Learn some grammar before attempting to misuse words....


TO thread- this story is dead. Bumping yourself should not even be allowed.

he is writing a story it takes time

[buddhist23]

Originally Posted by knightl

he is writing a story it takes time

and btw dude read my response to you, you wanted me to brake my sentence down into more than one but you just said it can't be broken more please stop trolling

LOL! ARE YOU AN @$#%? IT'S YOUR OWN SENTENCE.

"TO buddhist


no therefore its one sentence already so it can't be broken down into more sentences as it conveys one point and it does exist go learn a word or 2"

^ IT'S YOUR SENTENCE- PLZ- FEEL FREE TO LOOK IT UP"

In fact- I'll post your post again.

"Originally Posted by knightl
When can you do more theres only a handful of storys out there and this ones the best of the orcs,

ME WANT MORE!





TO buddhist


no therefore its one sentence already so it can't be broken down into more sentences as it conveys one point and it does exist go learn a word or 2"

SOWWY- I THOUGHT YOU WERE AN AVERAGE PERSON WHO COULD RECOGNIZE THEIR OWN SENTENCES!! Troll FAIL

And it's "break" not break. Please, stop trolling. This just PROVES what I said about you in previous threads.

And dude, i can make up a fantasy story in MINUTES- it's not HARD at all especially when your documenting/turning your actions ingame into a story too. He already has the plot ( what he does ingame ) - all he needs is to write it out. SO EASY TO DO WHEN LORE AND PLOT IS ALREADY DONE FOR YOU!!!!!!

[Dreamwalker]

Uh, buddhist: CHILL.

Seems on every thread you and knight are at each others' throats. Can't we just get along?


(and btw, if writing a story is so easy, why don't you write one?)

(and btw again, this conversation is taking over the guy's thread; it's supposed to be about his story, anyway)