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Old 02-15-2010, 07:56 PM
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Think about it real hard before you go to bed. In my experience at least, some of my dreams have been my best stories. They need a little trimming here and there, sometimes a backbone, but they have lots of imagination. See if you can use it to your advantage.
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Old 02-16-2010, 07:42 AM
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... i never sleep, i always stay conscious. Ohh the boring nights, however i constantly think perverted things during that time if that kinda thing is a dream? Also sometimes i think about how it would be to use fire in what ever kind i wish. Perhaps even lighting or being the leader of a robotical army. Also i got one dream once (or that my fantasy ran wild) Orb knights like i call it Everyone can buy orbs everywhere and then you build your clothing and equipment and fight it out on the open street. Magic is allowed. You can use a lot of stuff also you can use points you earn in battle to get better weapons and you can beat certain people to get better items. Or you can get armors. Then you use the orbs to decide on something or just battle endlessly. You can get cut down but then the orb will transport you to safety. Its awesome also it doesn't rely on lvl but rather skill or luck.

Thats my fantasy gone wild for you, its especially strong when i am alone. I can walk around endlessly looking completely lost but experiencing things However i totally suck at explaining them. If people got a picture of all my fantasy they would probably go mad and kill themselves. Also it has already destroyed my own mind, i remember back three years ago before it began. I was so shy i could not do a thing i never had courage to do anything. Then my fantasy recreated me into someone who laughs when seeing blood and the worst thing i can think of is not death actually i am not afraid of it since i have seen it so many times in my fantasies. I bet if people knew what i was thinking i would probably be sent to a mental hospital. Luckily i can somewhat restrain myself in front of others.

Thats my story on fantasy, i can make anything inside it. I guess i share to much personal info here, i guess i am nice and lazy its just my mind thats teared quite nicely apart. However i can live with it, i mean seriously what can you expect of teenagers in this age. The first time you watch **** is in kindergarten. Your first horror films when you were three, all the lower grades where surfing the internet and playing mujaffa with his bmw and always getting the cam. People have their first time when they are 10 years(there are some of those too) The future is ****ed to say it simply If only internet was not as tempting as it is.
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Old 02-16-2010, 09:19 AM
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‘And what fine beast do we be dining on tonight!’

Revelling the beast from behind their back the hunters showed a wonderous boar but it was only a small one, one which wouldn’t feed many mounths tonight but at least some of the food stores would not be used tonight. ‘Cook it then try and hand out boar and some bread from the cart’ Arthas ordered as he pointed towards the cart.

Night came swiftly, some didn’t get the chance to finish the nights meals before the dark blanket of night enveloped them, and those that had finish quickly retired to their tents. Arthas on the other hand was planning on staying awake and take the first guard duty to let the others have some rest. Arthas with his blanket made pitch on the highest ground to watch over the encampment, covered by thorns it was the best point to watch over the encampment as although he would spot any danger before any other points he left him self open to the elements and surprise attacks and with little open group to direct your movements in. ‘And what is the commander doing guarding the camp? Isn’t that someone else’s job’ Tomas interrupted

‘Tomas you of all should know that they need there sleep to try and wipe there memories. The guards amongst all need their strength as the journey will be the hardest on them’

‘And in this journey will you not need yours? You of all should know that tired generals make rash decisions that can lose him a battle, now get to sleep I shall take over. Remember you are a commander, im a mere solider and I will not take no as an answer’

‘Tomas you are a good friend but I need this, if you look over at the encampment I doubt many people will sleep this night but we must give them the chance to. I cannot sleep so what’s the point in trying, all I can do is offer you to join me but I will not leave my post’

Then some rustling in the bush behind them went on and three figures appeared ‘Then we do it together’ Alex said before Arthas lunged at him with his sword sheathed.

‘Arthas we cannot sleep either and we thought u might need the company, do not forget ever that we are your friends now and we will be forever. So we cannot just let you take on this without our help’ Nathan put in.

Gathered around the point they lit a fire and talked all night about various things, from their fathers and how much they missed them and their guidance in these times to discussing the pretty girls in the camp. For them it seemed like nothing had happened they grieved in their heads and heart letting nothing influence their decisions and with only one thing in mind to keep them going, Revenge.

Night went quickly and the first rays of sun started to creep over the mountains, people started to stumble out of their tents. The girls had visible tears down their faces, but the boys tried not to show anything but it was clear the only boys who pull this off was Nathan, Alex, Robin, Tomas and Arthas strolling into camp they never showed a sign of grief or tiredness. Arthas was surprised as he had thought Tomas and himself would be the only ones as their fathers were the commanders of armies.

Quickly gathering up and making ready to move a small group of people caught Arthas and his friends eyes, they were not his people and quickly sheathed their weapons. ‘I doubt they have seen us there in thick forest Arthas, I shall go to them see who they are take points and get ready to help me Arthas do what you must with the people’ Tomas ordered knowing Arthas must not be put in danger, as he would be the only one to revenge the fallen.

Moving towards the group Tomas noticed that they weren’t soldiers but just people moving blindly into the forest, their faces covered in smoke and their clothes ripped from toe to top, there were not many there about 12 maximum and mostly female this didn’t look like a raiding party. ‘Who are you and what your business here is’ Tomas bellowed at the oncoming people sword at the ready.

Stumbling and wavering the people looked up they looked like they had just come from the battlefield, no one seemed eager to talk but one stepped forward ‘We are from the village of Longueville a vassal to the Darssen lord Rand, we were attacked by some men and we are the only survivors. Now you know us who are you?’

‘We are what’s left of Darssen, we have among us the son of rand, we are hoping to reach the empire of Teria in hope to raise an army and reclaim the lands in name of the King, now follow me to the camp we shall feed you and give you new clothes’ Walking back from the under bush the others joined Tomas and escorted them towards the caravan.

Arthas had got the caravan moving quickly gone less than 5 minutes Arthas had already moved over 100 yards Nathan caught up with Arthas filled in the situation, then the rest caught up. Stopping the caravan to get the full story from these strangers while feeding and clothing them. They learnt that the attackers planed to squash and resistance that they would face quickly before any of it became to much nuisance. But what they also knew that there was an army heading to relieve the people ‘General Yumis, he’s coming with the army’ Arthas said upon hearing this.

Now with this new information Arthas now moved with more intent than normal to help not only the people but to get to Yumis to join him. The caravan was quickly on the move again navigating the forest was difficult and soon they reached the plains near the mountain with open ground they were visible from long distances but they moved much quicker than they did when they were in the forest, lush dense forest turned into flat green grass land.

The land was also still in Rands territory and Arthas meet with more refugees more and more villages suffering and the 100 that they started with was now almost 1000 strong. Some villagers managing to escape in the hundreds some in the dozens but everyone made Arthas’ cause more intent and everyone with their own tales on what happened.

The sun started to turn to an orange and Arthas decided to look to make a camp already sending out hunters to fetch food, they needed to bring lots of food as the food they brought would not last the week with this number of people he had found on the way. Arthas soon settled on a wide open plain visible from afar but Arthas had decided there were to many to make camp in a forest without stretching his guards to an unhelpful number. The number of refugees had increased but so had the number of guards he now had 100 guards at this command.

The land Arthas had chosen was a wipe grass plain making it easy for the hunters to spot to bring in the food for the people, he had almost 50 people bringing in food for everyone. The grassy plain had a village in the far east smoke rising from the whole village, there was also a few farms close by Arthas had hoped the army left the stores of food, but most were empty with only a few out of the many still with some in.

People started to feast and get ready for the night that was soon enveloping them, Arthas gave one last look at the area before settling in. And on that last turn of his head and bright torch caught his eye near the forest from where his hunters had hunted, but they were all back or so he had though. ‘Guards make line on me!’ he ordered few knew what to do and Arthas had to put men in place. They lined up between the light and the camp. Arthas took 50 of his men leaving the other 50 in charge with Tomas who had to organise them.

Marching towards the light Arthas saw glinting armour, this wasn’t a mere hunter or some more refugees they were soldiers walking towards them it seemed only a part of about 30 or 40 but they looked experienced compared to his. Starting to regret leaving Tomas and the rest Arthas marched on, by the time they had reach one another the light had faded completely and Arthas walked towards the group with a torch in his hand.

‘You attack my party and I’ll make sure you shall not live to see another sun’ Arthas said with a rather aggressive tone.

‘We are the remnants of the Darssen army, we do not wish you harm. I am Jeriko and I was the 2nd in command, we were ambushed as we set up camp we only survive as we were patrolling the local area while they set up. All perished, now who are you?’ he said in a rather downbeat tone

‘You’re what are left? But you were my last hope’ Arthas went on and on failing to compute with the new information ‘Sorry I am Arthas son of Lord Rand, we are on a journey to Teria to raise an army and recapture my lands, and would be happy for you to join us.’ Arthas finally caught himself.

Kneeling Jeriko agreed to the proposal


p.s. Thanks for your help
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Old 02-16-2010, 10:10 AM
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GREAT!!! I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT BECOMES OF THIS STORY!!!!! However it was a bit unnatural for people to just join him but anyways I LOVE IT! Continue like this and you can make a book worthy of publishing
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Old 02-16-2010, 08:13 PM
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Keep it coming! I know what you mean about fantasy. A lot of times, people assume i am spaced, but really my brain is going a mile a minute, just thinking.
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Old 02-17-2010, 01:00 AM
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well, mine goes further. I think even down to the smallest detail like the pen on my desk when i am leading a space armada However since i use so much brain capacity on this i got nothing for school and thus only get 4-5 on every test. (Third and second best)
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Old 02-21-2010, 12:22 PM
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The sun was already behind the mountian ranges over in the west, the last few rays of light reaching out desperatly as they struggled to find the forest line, yet Arthas incisted that the group be searched and interogate a few of the soilders before giving away the encampment to strangers. Luckly Jerikos story mached with everyone else's and they all looked the part with blackened faces and blood stains covering their bodies, eaither Jeriko and his men were good at acting or they were being honest. Arthas decided that the need for 50 trained soilders to accompany him outweighed the danger. Arthas quickly moved everyone from the forest line where the meeting happened, the big old forest could conseal many foes and Arthas perfered to keep him and his men alive.

They moved in an awkward staggard line comming up to the encampment, Arthas and his men were everywhere and looked more like trouble makers than guards. While Jeriko and his men were in a 4 abreast and 11 deep line in perfect timing, Arthas quickly decided that jeriko was to be his Training commander, he needed well drilled and well orginised men to get him through this and jeriko looked like the man who could give him what he wanted. They were barly 100 yards away from the encampment when a voice bellowed 'This encampment is protected by me, and i have here to defend it 100 of the best archers in mythador! now state your purpose or face my judgement!'

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Old 02-21-2010, 03:38 PM
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Keep it going.
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Old 02-22-2010, 01:04 AM
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