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Old 01-08-2012, 09:37 PM
knightl knightl is offline
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Originally Posted by buddhist23 View Post
no therefore its one sentence already so it can't be broken down into more sentences as it conveys one point and it does exist go learn a word or 2

That's a run on sentence.
Learn some grammar before attempting to misuse words....

TO thread- this story is dead. Bumping yourself should not even be allowed.
he is writing a story it takes time
"Faithless is he who says farewell when the road darkens"

Last edited by knightl : 01-10-2012 at 02:27 AM.