Originally Posted by buddhist23
no therefore its one sentence already so it can't be broken down into more sentences as it conveys one point and it does exist go learn a word or 2
That's a run on sentence.
Learn some grammar before attempting to misuse words....
TO thread- this story is dead. Bumping yourself should not even be allowed.
he is writing a story it takes time
"Faithless is he who says farewell when the road darkens"
Last edited by knightl : 01-10-2012 at 02:27 AM.