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Old 01-06-2012, 12:13 PM
buddhist23 buddhist23 is offline
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Originally Posted by knightl View Post
love your story hoping for more.

You guys if you can't say something straightforward that the meaning isn't obvious avoid posting it so others can cliquishness in this story
I..I..I don't even know what to say..your sentence is lacking a ton of commas and breaks. I don't understand it. Please say it straightforward.
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