I love the title.
Its great to see a story with dwarves in it. This is a really great start. Can't wait to read more.
I also started on a story about dwarves myself. I don't know if I'll post it. I have about a page right now.
"90% of what is considered "impossible" is, in fact, possible. The other 10% will become possible with the passage of time & technology." -Hideo Kojima