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Hey, I've mentioned it before on the forums that I'm in a band, but recently I've started doing some of my own stuff. I mostly plan on doing techno/dance music. I know I'm pretty bad, but I'd love to get some criticism on what I have currently up (which is just demos for now). I've never done anything on my own so I'd love some opinions on what I could try or do better.

Thanks

http://soundcloud.com/dylan-lang

Setup: (budget low)
microKorg XL
Yamaha PSR E413
Audacity

I like your Level20. Sounds a bit like a modern version of Robo (Atari Game). Nothing beats classic Atari Games. I also set up SoundCloud, here's some of my ideas even though they aren't as complete as yours.

http://soundcloud.com/doctor-steam/sets

Hey would you mind following me, I'll do the same for you, just to help get the music out. Honestly, I have a lot of incomplete projects currently, but the trouble I'm having is that I get a good beat/rhythm for the chorus section of the song, but I don't know how to deviate from that and be able to transition to different parts of the song because honestly, who wants to hear the same beat over and over. I've heard a bunch of lame electro artists out there that just play the same beat for 5 minutes straight and you feel like you want to puke after hearing it for so long. Also, I'd like to add some vocals to some of my songs, but not sure what to right. My plan is to hopefully start DJ'ing at parties and such to be able to play some of my own stuff, but I don't want it to be trash if I'm playing it...:D

I'd appreciate as much feedback as possible.

Thanks

Not a problem I just did. I don't dedicate as much of my time to music as to other things but it helps me out. Eyes sometimes hurt too much. I use FL Studio / Reason / Logic and SoundForge (for edits / sampling).

If anyone else would look at it, that'd be greatly appreciated.

Thanks